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Making Decisions

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"Can we?"


       "Yes..."


"But should we?"


        "... ... ..."
Freestyle written for #SixWordStories

Writing these is so fun :P
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3wyl's avatar
I like the way you have included the ellipsis at the end. It's like an extra word, almost, but.. yeah, obviously not. It's pretty clever in that sense in how the ellipsis is kind of used as a substitute for that, really.

The way you've set it out is nice, and I like the way you have just included the dialogue and nothing more so that we really focus on what you're trying to convey to us.

Great stuff. :)