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The Beginning

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Garden of Eden


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mankind
Six word story
Prompt word: Garden :)
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3wyl's avatar
Ooh, really nice!

I think it's fantastic how you've portrayed the concept so visually and powerfully at that. It's brilliant how you've emphasised how big a downfall it was for mankind.. and yeah, you've stressed the space between Earth and Heaven well there too.

Really awesome. It's cool how there is no punctuation too, as if to say that this is really only the beginning.